An onboarding screen isn't a sales pitch — it's the place that triggers the **first action**. "Welcome! Let's start your amazing journey" feels nice but never says what to click next.
Effective onboarding copy is task-oriented: "Enter your name," "Invite your first teammate" — one specific, doable action right now. For multi-step flows, showing "1 of 3" makes the remaining effort predictable.
The demo's ✕ ends on an exclamation; ✓ leads straight into the button the user should press.
When to use
On first-launch or post-signup screens, lead the sentence with the one action to take now, not an exclamation.